My First Original Song!!!

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Description: Well...this is my first attempt at an original song. It is very rough. I'm not even sure about the title yet. The other instruments your hear are me on my keyboard as well. I just recorded them over the video track. The piano and singing are live, so it's not perfect, but I hope you enjoy it! Please let me know what you think. I'd appreciate feedback, positive or negative. And don't forget to rate and subscribe!!! Thanks a lot, ~Dan Lyrics Verse 1 When I look into your eyes, I see him And I listen to your lies, as you tell me where you've been Chorus I can't pretend anymore, though I still have love for you Got this chain around my heart, but now we're through Verse 2 I say goodnight with just a kiss, but you turn your head Love should never feel like this, or so they've said Chorus I can't pretend anymore. Wish you could have loved me too Got this chain around my heart, but now we're through Bridge Chorus I can't pretend anymore. There's just one thing I can do Gotta break this chain, 'cause now we're through But I miss you baby Verse 3 Now I sit here on my own. I'm so alone, yeah so alone. And I'm waiting by the phone, but I know you're not coming home Chorus Can't stop crying anymore. How I wish things could have changed Couldn't break this chain, but now you're gone No, I couldn't break this chain, but now you're gone
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ProsperiaFan ::: Favorites =) =0 =) 07-09-22 01:35:31 __________________________________________________
mbwchampion ::: Favorites The piano sounds familiar. But I like the song, Great job, and nice mood. 5 stars for sure. Keep it up. 07-09-21 17:05:06 __________________________________________________
jdjustice72 ::: Favorites very nice work! :-) 07-09-21 14:59:54 __________________________________________________
melindawong88 ::: Favorites Nice, good job! :D 07-09-21 01:29:17 __________________________________________________
saishusong19 ::: Favorites hey thanks for your comment on on my song first of all i really like your song, its gonna be stuck in my head now :p ahahaha you should definitely write more songs this is really good, good job i keep wanting to write more but i just cant get them further than out of my head yet well anyways, good job :) 07-09-20 17:57:16 __________________________________________________
dm294 ::: Favorites Thanks. I'm glad you like it :) 07-09-20 15:28:44 __________________________________________________
marinemom77 ::: Favorites Wow...this is really really good! Drew me in right away. 07-09-20 15:22:20 __________________________________________________
dm294 ::: Favorites Thank you so much! I just commented on your song as well :) 07-09-20 15:19:05 __________________________________________________
janiekisses ::: Favorites You have such a beautiful voice. The guitar is haunting. I love it!! 07-09-20 14:57:55 __________________________________________________
JohnnySt23 ::: Favorites Amazing dude! You have a really special talent! 07-09-20 14:34:21 __________________________________________________